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To Leave a Whisper by ~lordlossxz:iconlordlossxz:



A Prophecy was written
It fortold of a day
A time and a place
That would destroy a world

It told of the day
That my time would end
And my world would be rend
Shattered apart
In the riptide

Not even a ghost
Would be left of my world
To leave a whisper
In the wind
To flow through the air
To brush someones mind
To invade their thoughts

The soul of the victim
Is consumed in the darkness
That's left when the light
Forsakes him
And nothing is real
And there's nothing to feel
And your body is gone

You life has decayed
Your body's decayed
Your soul is decayed

And what is left
When a world is destroyed
In the time that it takes
To blink

You have no present
No past
No future
Because there is no one
And there is nothing
To remember you by

When a world is destroyed
The ones who took this world
And influenced it
And shaped it
Will find their own worlds
Have been cast
Into oblivion

Like a ripple
One little event
Like a grain of sand
Dropped into a still pond
Will grow from a spec
Into something vast
And uncontrolled

Every life this ripple touches
Will be ripped apart
By its force
And a new ripple is born
To repeat the cycle

Time is lost now
It does not exist
When there is nothing

And I cannot feel time
For I am nothing
Not even a whisper
Left in the wind
©2009 ~lordlossxz
:iconlordlossxz:

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Why am I in such a dark mood...

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:iconviolenthysteria:
The flow is a bit choppy, but word choice is great.


And yes, I am allowed to still read your writing. I don't care if we're not talking. You don't have to respond.

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You know I won't say sorry. The pain has a bad reaction; a blend of fear and passion. You know what it's like to believe. It makes me want to scream.

Photography [link]
:iconlordlossxz:
well thank you. i can still reply ^^

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Are my screams loud enough? Can you hear me now? Or should I paint it with red on the bathroom floor?

Read my poems, please!
[link]
:iconviolenthysteria:
No you can't >____>;

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You know I won't say sorry. The pain has a bad reaction; a blend of fear and passion. You know what it's like to believe. It makes me want to scream.

Photography [link]
:iconanz84:
uhh... first off, why aren't you and amanda talking? *confused look*

anyway...

choppy yes, but great word choice like she said.
and dark moods are very useful. for producing stuff such as this. :XD:
:iconlordlossxz:
oh, so ur one of Amanda's friends? okaay
anywho. thanks again ^^

we're not talking cuz we got in a fight and both said some really cruel things to eachother so we decided its better to not be friends

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Are my screams loud enough? Can you hear me now? Or should I paint it with red on the bathroom floor?

Read my poems, please!
[link]
:iconanz84:
GAH!
YOU KNOW ME KYLE!!!
MEGAN!!!
me!
this is aggravating i hope you know >.>

remember, you told me how to set yourself on fire with cologne but told me not to do it bc i was accident prone!?

we've talked a bagillion times! even on the damn phone!

and that sucks, about y'all fighting... :( i know you hate losing people you care about. :hug:
:iconlordlossxz:
yes yes yes. i figured it out! ok! it just took a while. cuz... you fail. lol
eh. i cared about her, but it was getting to a point that was like.. bleh idk

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Are my screams loud enough? Can you hear me now? Or should I paint it with red on the bathroom floor?

Read my poems, please!
[link]
:iconanz84:
well, as long as it doesn't bother you, i guess you're good ^_^
:iconlordlossxz:
yesh. im ok ^^

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Are my screams loud enough? Can you hear me now? Or should I paint it with red on the bathroom floor?

Read my poems, please!
[link]

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