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Can't Stay by ~lordlossxz:iconlordlossxz:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Human Nature > Open


Why do you stay
You'll only be hurt
And I don't want to play
This game

I'm sorry I can't be
I'm sorry I'll never be

Perfect

"Just go away," you say
Something so easy
So simple

But to leave is to die
My mind won't survive
This seperating of souls

I don't want to leave
I want you til the end
I'll see it through, you'll see

But you better believe
As much as I'd cry
Though my heart just might die
I'll no longer try
To stop you

Love is a feeling
A pleasure
A pain
Hits you hard
Screaming your name

Watch you leave
Just walk away
Know this is the very last day

You have a last chance
Bring me out of this trance
And save my life
Or take it

Leave me alone
Just go away
This pain feels like home
In a familiar way

Bleeding out
Cant get out
Must get out

Why wont it stop?
Just make it stop!

I'm sorry
My love
My life...

It's the end
©2009 ~lordlossxz
:iconlordlossxz:

Author's Comments

something a lot different from my usual style i think

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~beauty-in-ur-eyes Apr 20, 2009, 8:52:29 PM
its sad....

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Merry Meet Merry Part Blessings to the gentle heart
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~ViolentHysteria Jun 29, 2009, 5:10:24 PM
"Love is a feeling
A pleasure
A pain
Hits you hard
Screaming your name"
Best line.

This is really well written.

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You know I won't say sorry. The pain has a bad reaction; a blend of fear and passion. You know what it's like to believe. It makes me want to scream.

Photography [link]
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~lordlossxz Jun 29, 2009, 11:14:44 PM
im glad you like it. i think theyre both a bit different than normal
which is good

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Are my screams loud enough? Can you hear me now? Or should I paint it with red on the bathroom floor?

Read my poems, please!
[link]
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~lordlossxz Jun 29, 2009, 11:19:35 PM
it was sad.. but is it good?

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Are my screams loud enough? Can you hear me now? Or should I paint it with red on the bathroom floor?

Read my poems, please!
[link]
:iconbeauty-in-ur-eyes:
~beauty-in-ur-eyes Jun 29, 2009, 11:30:48 PM
How do i say... i react to your pain. Pull my heart out. Give it away. There your pain, painted before my eyes. Will i say I love your pain. Your greatest accomplishment is dying inside? I hold no cruelty to that in me. Your words are beautiful, but the message, I will never applaud that message.

~I just realized paint.. minus T is pain.. paint your pain~

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Merry Meet Merry Part Blessings to the gentle heart
:iconviolenthysteria:
~ViolentHysteria Jun 30, 2009, 7:58:21 AM
Definitely.

It's not generic kyle writing.

It's definitely a good change. More attention grabbing.

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You know I won't say sorry. The pain has a bad reaction; a blend of fear and passion. You know what it's like to believe. It makes me want to scream.

Photography [link]
:iconlordlossxz:
~lordlossxz Jun 30, 2009, 8:27:49 PM
i dont want an applause for a message. simply acknowlegement that i can create such emotions in people, such as yourself. i like that
and i like acknowlegement of the beauty my words can hold as well

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Are my screams loud enough? Can you hear me now? Or should I paint it with red on the bathroom floor?

Read my poems, please!
[link]
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~AnZ84 Jul 24, 2009, 12:13:37 PM
"Love is a feeling
A pleasure
A pain
Hits you hard
Screaming your name"

I agreed with Amanda. Best lines. Totally got me there.
Not your usual style, but same dark feeling.
Loveth it.
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~lordlossxz Jul 24, 2009, 2:23:57 PM
thanks ^^

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Are my screams loud enough? Can you hear me now? Or should I paint it with red on the bathroom floor?

Read my poems, please!
[link]
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